This is the complete review of my site below from Dorkie Reviews. They were also very helpful and they finished my review very timely.

Web: URL (http://www.under-the-gun.org/tkforever/) - Tasuki Forever
Type: Fansite
Reviewer: Samantha
Overall: 83/100
Date Reviewed: 02/25/2005

Loading Time [8/10]: It takes a bit for the top image to load, but the rest of the content loads instantly.

First Impression [15/20]: The text on the splash page has to be highlighted to be read. Maybe you could put it in a table that matches the colors on your main page. The colors on the main page are pretty, but the text color against the background is hard on the eyes. You can barely read it, so maybe you should change the color. The dark blue with the purple color you have seem to clash a little as well.

Layout/Graphics [26/30]: The layout setup isn’t seen often, and the top image is pretty enough to make up for the time it takes to load. Everything is organized pretty well. The text hurts your eyes though, like I said, and also the I-frame the tagboard is in sticks out like a sore thumb. If it didn’t have a horizontal scrollbar it wouldn’t be so bad. Maybe you could put it in a pop-up window instead?

Originality/Content [17/20]: The layout and image seem to be quiet original, and they go together well except for the dark blue color clashing with the purple color you have. The name of the links might be a little confusing for some visitors, but other than that you have tons of good content. You might want to put a “back” link at the bottom of your pages that contain the content so it is easier for the visitor to navigate.

Errors/Spelling [10/10]: No errors and the spelling was great.

Overall [7/10]: Everything is nice and goes together smoothly except a few little things. The first being the text on your splash page. Also, like I’ve mentioned before, the text on your main page is hard to read, and the dark blue clashes with the purple you have. Other than that everything seems to be really nice.



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